September 22, 2011

An Ancient Story Retold


The Snake Charmer, Henri Rousseau, 1907
Image Courtesy Magpie Tales

She lay by the lakeside; in the moonlight casting no perceptible shadow  against the glistening waters.  Strangely restless and content, weaving and unweaving  her matted coils…some stangled and twisted to hideous effect or laid as they were. Dark, tangled strings that reflected the  surrounding gloom.
He had escaped far too often, she had let him live the ignorant dream…. his scent deadly yet irrestible …his high notes ripping her apart…
 Letting him believe to be the victor in this ancient game she had perfected into an art. The night was their timeless friend, eternal enemy; bewitching , betraying, bespoken….rendering them puppets to mutual desire and hatred.
A secret dance,  feverish  glance lacking tenderness….wine and viper, stillness and motion,  beast and prey circling  in vanity and pride.
Soft footfalls, shodden grass groaning under the slight strain….picture perfect. They waited, glinting eyes and forked tongue for the sweet song to soothe and succumb to, for a little while.
 Medusa and the nightly visitor, her  lover and foe, evenly matched but tonight one would fall , the other would savour a shallow victory…..as he played his magical notes, the coils unravelled….inhabiting every inch of the tiny meadow that was their’s alone to claim.

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13 comments:

21 Wits said...

The photo is quite stunning, those colors just make me want to grab a paint brush and create for myself...and the words are as lovely too! Quite the story...

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Lovely words, excellent write.

Anna :o]

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

amazing story.

Stafford Ray said...

This well crafted poem expresses the yin-yang of life's engagement so well. Love-hate, life-death, etc.
Your haiku, 'True Elixir?' on the other hand, seeks freedom a yearning for disengagement. We are funny critters aren't we!

Rawknrobyn.blogspot.com said...

You've just lifted me into a dreamlike state. "sweet song to soothe and succumb to" <--Great alliteration. As always, you choose just the right words. This is tense yet beautiful.
xoRobyn

David Macaulay said...

this is great Rek - also goes well with the illustration

Anonymous said...

Great Post! followed :)

Erratic Thoughts said...

Oh man,Excellent wordplay...
Such a poetic view on Medusa...

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

The Medusa and charmer, beautifully weaved story. Perhaps either one has to fall today. And the victory would be shallow too. But would this be noticed by a silent visitor and be narrated for ever?


Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

nutschell said...

I would so like to read this as a fantasy novel! Sounds like a great story :D
nutschell
www.thewritingnut.com

AS said...

I loved ur blog ans the blog template :D

Lydia Kang said...

So magical and lovely! *Sigh*

Doctor FTSE said...

Big improvement on Genesis! Well retold!

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