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She lay by the lakeside; in the moonlight casting no perceptible shadow against the glistening waters. Strangely restless and content, weaving and unweaving her matted coils…some stangled and twisted to hideous effect or laid as they were. Dark, tangled strings that reflected the surrounding gloom.
He had escaped far too often, she had let him live the ignorant dream…. his scent deadly yet irrestible …his high notes ripping her apart…
Letting him believe to be the victor in this ancient game she had perfected into an art. The night was their timeless friend, eternal enemy; bewitching , betraying, bespoken….rendering them puppets to mutual desire and hatred.
A secret dance, feverish glance lacking tenderness….wine and viper, stillness and motion, beast and prey circling in vanity and pride.
Soft footfalls, shodden grass groaning under the slight strain….picture perfect. They waited, glinting eyes and forked tongue for the sweet song to soothe and succumb to, for a little while.
Medusa and the nightly visitor, her lover and foe, evenly matched but tonight one would fall , the other would savour a shallow victory…..as he played his magical notes, the coils unravelled….inhabiting every inch of the tiny meadow that was their’s alone to claim.
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13 comments:
The photo is quite stunning, those colors just make me want to grab a paint brush and create for myself...and the words are as lovely too! Quite the story...
Lovely words, excellent write.
Anna :o]
amazing story.
This well crafted poem expresses the yin-yang of life's engagement so well. Love-hate, life-death, etc.
Your haiku, 'True Elixir?' on the other hand, seeks freedom a yearning for disengagement. We are funny critters aren't we!
You've just lifted me into a dreamlike state. "sweet song to soothe and succumb to" <--Great alliteration. As always, you choose just the right words. This is tense yet beautiful.
xoRobyn
this is great Rek - also goes well with the illustration
Great Post! followed :)
Oh man,Excellent wordplay...
Such a poetic view on Medusa...
The Medusa and charmer, beautifully weaved story. Perhaps either one has to fall today. And the victory would be shallow too. But would this be noticed by a silent visitor and be narrated for ever?
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
I would so like to read this as a fantasy novel! Sounds like a great story :D
nutschell
www.thewritingnut.com
I loved ur blog ans the blog template :D
So magical and lovely! *Sigh*
Big improvement on Genesis! Well retold!
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