September 05, 2011

Haiku - 17






Reflecting spirit /
Night rider streaks across sky /
Darkness flourishes //


5-7-5





10 comments:

Leo said...

Those clouds look filled and hungry!

knot2share said...

I see an interesting picture in my mind, when I read this Haiku - As the night rider spreads his cape on daylight, darkness begines to flourish!!! :-)

Nice take!

poetry-diary.com said...

I'm not sure I find flourishing darkness very comfortable, but then the image is quite threatening(!). I can see the spirit though, and the haiku captures it.

andy sewina said...

Night Rider beware!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Although the darkness flourishes, light is always more powerful than darkness.

Things That Flourish Here and Here and Here

beccagivens said...

The comparison using Night Rider provides the mystery of an evening's stretch ... it balances the day and provides rest for the weary! Then again, the nighttime is when much gets accomplished!!!

Nicely done!!

beccagivens said...

The comparison using Night Rider provides the mystery of an evening's stretch ... it balances the day and provides rest for the weary! Then again, the nighttime is when much gets accomplished!!!

Nicely done!!

dsnake1 said...

this is dark, i like! :)

you have captured the mood very well here.

Short Poems said...

Beautifully done, love it!

Jack Edwards Poetry said...

Perfect Haiku. Loved it.

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