Using four of the prompts, doing a flash fiction, a pitch or logline, an inspired poem.
Additionally,
attempting three of the activities tied by a common theme,
in a genre never before attempted,
and requesting a critique.
Flash Fiction
In a happier time reflected in her grandfather’s picture in the burlap, the sneak would have a name not just a number. The one who had foreseen the rise of Stonia, now something evoking fear and despondency was long dead but the movement he co-founded was alive in the hidden depths. She often wondered what had turned the still beautiful woman into the epitome of sadism.
Pitch/Logline
Wc 89
Grey cloaks the land,
For the Rach Writes' Second Campaigner Challenge
Prompt 1:
Two people are sitting together under the remains of a concrete bridge. Their backs are against a rusted bridge support. One person’s leg is cut. The other person has wet hair.
Do one or more of the following:
attempting three of the activities tied by a common theme,
in a genre never before attempted,
and requesting a critique.
Flash Fiction
All that was left was to wait it out.
He stared at her, elegant looking despite the wet hair from the drizzle that caught them unprepared. Shooing away the starving
kids at the garbage dumps hadn’t been easy, grim remainders of his past. He shifted
his leg stump away from the jetting rails of what had once been the bridge of Bridgewater
town. The pain would resurface soon making travel a nightmare.
The message had been
delivered, the bird in his trap, dawn bringing the well earned reward. He day
dreamed of the golden patterns, enjoyable side effects of the pain killing serum.
In a happier time reflected in her grandfather’s picture in the burlap, the sneak would have a name not just a number. The one who had foreseen the rise of Stonia, now something evoking fear and despondency was long dead but the movement he co-founded was alive in the hidden depths. She often wondered what had turned the still beautiful woman into the epitome of sadism.
Eric, she felt an ache
at the very sound... this pathetic human staring at her brought her closer to
the goal, the mission’s success hanging on his ignorance.
wc 198
Pitch/Logline
In a world bereft of most natural resources,
the International Council rules with an iron fist. The self labelled high priestess
and sadist Stonia, the true wielder of power ruthlessly mows any opposition.
But the MOB, an underground resistance plots her demise, their reluctant assassin,
the unassuming Charlotte, granddaughter of one of the founders,
A simple plan that
needs only an image and the medical skills of the widow of the previous leader, finds her
embroiled in a moral conflict that could sabotage the mission and destroy the
movement...
Wc 89
Poem - Form 'Ode'
Grey cloaks the land,
Where once walked the
green maiden
Lovely and captivating
visions she spun.
The birds sang, the
river hummed
the mad wind whistled in
passing.
Happy faces, laughing
eyes, scampering feet
were not yet yellowing
postcard smiles.
She stood there,
straight backed yet unsure,
taking in the detail,
stilling the mind and
heart
with the skilled hands
of years past.
The expectations weighed
heavy on her chest.
The spirit never truly waned
nor wavered
until she met her,
The mother who could have been hers.
Prompt 1:
Two people are sitting together under the remains of a concrete bridge. Their backs are against a rusted bridge support. One person’s leg is cut. The other person has wet hair.
Four picture prompts.
- Write a pitch/logline for a book based on the prompts (less than 100 words)
- Write a short story/flash fiction piece of less than 200 words based on the prompts
- Write a poem with a twist using the prompts as inspiration (in less than 200 words)
- Write a story/poem in five sentences, each sentence based on one of the prompts
- Write a poem/flash fiction piece (in less than 200 words) about the water pear *without* using the words “pear”, “spoon”, or “droplet”.
- Complete at least three of the above activities and tie them all together with a common theme (feel free to either state the theme in your post or leave us to guess what it might be)
- Write in a genre that is not your own
- Ask Challenge entrants to critique your writing.
25 comments:
I especially liked your pitch. (#30)
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Correct me if I'm wrong, but I'd say you did a marvelous job of keeping it all in a common thread...I especially like the visions, like, the starving kids at the garbage dump, the leg stump...still beautiful woman into the epitode of sadism, the reluctant assassin....drizzle and everything visionary completes such a moving piece for me! Wonderful writing!
Great job! I really love the poem, and I'd read more. :)
Congratulations! You have been shortlisted to move onto stage two.
Great use of theme throughout the three pieces!
Loved your video on Lee's blog. Just wanted to say win or lose you are a winner. I love that you are into dreams.
dreamweaver
Excellent job! I like them all, but I think the poem is my favorite.
Shannon at The Warrior Muse, co-host of the 2012 #atozchallenge! Twitter: @AprilA2Z
Lovely! They're all fantastic - but I think I like the poem the best.
Thanks for stopping by my place. I didn't scroll down far enough to notice the Follower section, I am happy to say I found it this time. The video you made for Alex blew my mind. You are a talented DREAMER! And you do sound like a little girl.
dreamweaver
That's a tough challenge - I love the first one especially.
You create such wonderful, imaginative worlds, Rek, with interesting characters. I agree with Debra, you're a talented dreamer.
This is wonderful, Rek. You are a super-talented dreamer... such rich imagery in your writing!
Great imagery an a very distinctive voice. Loved your entries!
Melissa Maygrove #14
Interesting POV shift at the end of the flash fiction. It certainly intrigued me. I would read more.
The poem is my favourite of the three. Did you really create all this backstory just for the challenge? Wow!
Very imaginative Rek! Your poem was my favourite!
Found you on the A-Z list. Love your Pre-Raphaelite blog design! Look forward to your posts.
Great use of words! By the way, I tagged you on my blog:)
That was lovely. Wonderful. Moving. Love it.
Congratulations! You've been shortlisted to the semi-finals=)
I loved your poem.
"Happy faces, laughing eyes, scampering feet
were not yet yellowing postcard smiles." What amazing imagery you have here. I wish I could write poetry but I'm terrible at it. Anyway, I'm glad I got to your entry, it was a joy to read. (:
I liked the poem best of all, I think.
(I'm #82.)
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That' why I could never be a writer. You're so good at this Rek, you're really gifted.
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Glad you made it this far...would love to hear your take on the words scribbled. A comment every now and then keeps the blues away. :D
Since, crazy Mr. Blogspot won't let me reply to the comments here (is upset with the water ladies ever since they refused to verify visitors)...will do the next best thing, drop in to your blog to say my Vanakkam/Namaste/Salaam/Hello.