My brother the big dictator
hates my being a drake.
Stands by insisting I wear lavender;
to be seen as a pansy
by all the hot ducks I fancy.
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hates my being a drake.
Stands by insisting I wear lavender;
to be seen as a pansy
by all the hot ducks I fancy.
Added To Grandma's Goulash and Poetry Potluck
16 comments:
a few sentences, powerful message sent.
wow lovely words!:)
Mean brother, forcing his younger sibling to wear lavender!
I know, I have to be careful while commenting to ur words..they emit so strong messages..
Prejudice is so ingrained and harsh.
Powerful and brief. Perfect.
Well done! Interesting choice--you've made me think!
A cross-dressing goose! What is the world coming to?
Sibling rivalry I see ;-)
he he he Sounds like my home story me and my sis :)
Bikram's
LOL
laughing...I have to agree with Sharkbytes!
Whatever will we think of next?
Nice one!
What do siblings know, anyway?
You're so talented. I like the bounce and whimsical quality to this one. Plus, it's deep in meaning.
xoRobyn
haha sibling rivalry - I hear lavender is a very in colour this season! :)
So cute and you really have captured the essence of sibling rivalry and really it can be applied to close friends too sometimes jealousy and envy result in sabotage there as well
Idol! big brothers thought they're more powerful than younger ones..are they?
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