They waited
in silence
exhaling breath frozen,
numbed bodies
in the biting cold...
To the younger
warm and inviting
A house of horror
A house of horror
for the partner
the latest human sacrifice
entrapped within
the glossy green edifice.
4 comments:
beautiful.
Oooh my and eek ... very well written!
Yipes!!
@jingle your visits and words encourage...thanks. :)
@Deborah thanks for the eeks .... :D
@Tess thanks for the reaction hope I didn't do too bad .
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Glad you made it this far...would love to hear your take on the words scribbled. A comment every now and then keeps the blues away. :D
Since, crazy Mr. Blogspot won't let me reply to the comments here (is upset with the water ladies ever since they refused to verify visitors)...will do the next best thing, drop in to your blog to say my Vanakkam/Namaste/Salaam/Hello.