May 30, 2011

Haiku 15, # 39 RandomMusings For The Day



Lost in heavy trance
her son, glistening eyes saw
the bike rider start.

he drove on; unaware of shouts to stop,
she still stood, awaiting.

Added to Haiku Heights (first 3 lines), Grandma's Goulash (all 5 lines).




# 39 RandomMusings For The Day

If being a blood sucker is cool, aren't mosquitoes the coolest?....they don’t even sparkle in the sun. ;D



11 comments:

ladynimue said...

Loved the blog look !
And such touching post !

TS Hendrik said...

Very emotional for a haiku. Well done.

Kay L. Davies said...

A completely different take on the prompt photo. Yes, very well done.
— K

Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

Lynette Killam said...

I love your take on this prompt, and your page is simply a beautiful place to visit...:)

Grandma's Goulash said...

This is a spellbinding microfiction. I felt myself totally caught up in it.

meethimirchi said...

this is so captivating ,

Pat said...

This is poignantly beautiful. Nice combination with the haiku and then the rest for a great SY microfiction!

mindlovemisery said...

Very unique take on the prompt, wonderful. Your page is like a magical forest, its very nice

Jingle said...

amazing,
love your take/style.

Paulami said...

well written. and i could not but laugh on the randommusings for the day ;)

Rek said...

@Tim, @Jingle, @Paulomi, @mindlovemisery Love your feedbacks. :D
@Ladynimue thanks for lovely response to the Haiku
@Kay, @Lynette @Pat, @Grandma thanks for coming by and liking my MF.:)
@meethimirchi thanks for the comment.

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