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My muse is keen on a romantic twist, she refuses to cooperate otherwise so this stays as first chapter for now. ;(
Tentative Chapter 1 - Going Back
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The
rejection still ringing in her ears. She took perverse pleasure in that mocking
tone, for that was the only way she could hear his voice.
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The letter spoke... barely hearing the words till the last name. She turned back in shock, snatching the letter from his hand. No matter how many times she read or heard it, the name was a constant. The card fell to the floor from shaky hands...her thoughts forming and unforming at a dizzying pace. It could be true, her dark thoughts...
'He couldn't be..., could he?'
She heard Ced's calm voice in her head. 'There must be another explanation.'
'He will never break his promise unless...'
'I tried reaching T.C but it is too noisy here.'
She looked at him, words were unnecessary between them.
'I have arranged for us to leave in three days...but you still have your exams to clear.'
Swinging her legs, 'Later, these classes are not of much use in our world, are they?'
'Then why waste three years?'
'As if, you don't know the answer to that?'
'You could have enrolled with me. You had the grades.'
'Just the grades, not the aptitude...can't atleast you see? I needed to get away from them all. Those pitying faces, they knew, they always did.'
Ced shook his head sadly, pulling away from their connection, 'You are so wrong. They still wonder why you had to leave, if the letters to Ceci are anything to go by.'
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Epilogue
Ali and Simi trudged up the slope... the others would have gathered on the top by now.
"Some things never change around here." Simi poked around trying to fish out the harried souls.
The souls in question seeking solace from the stern elders, often alone or in groups of two and three by the lake.
'Sharing secrets inside the mansion walls was both embarrassing and dangerous' opined the teenagers.
This bunch was not smarter than the ones in the preceding years but used a different system of disguises. Hard to know if the portly, middle aged man she detected was indeed Shammi Uncle.
'Offending a senior member of the household meant hanging off a cliff like... Ria...
what the hell was that?'
***what the hell was that?'
Shammi replied “The Green Dew.”
Simi looked at him, a fear and question in her eyes as the others looked to the edge.
Ria or her lack thereof forgotten.
“Gather your clan children here, protect them all.” Time to seek his estranged warrior brothers, their very existence at stake.
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He paced across the floor, impatiently awaiting the messenger’s return.
‘The fool of an imp must have left the mansion four hours ago, can’t these useless fools do one thing right?’
He dismissed his personal aide with a flick of the hand, causing the poor creature to crash onto the cold stone floor outside the room.
The crystal revealed nothing as yet.
‘The ancients had set strong wards…but not for long.’
The curse was almost ready. The final words of the mantra left, to be uttered on the blue moon night, two days hence.
Hidden by him in the old walls 150 years ago, it slumbered waiting the unleashing of its dark potency.
“Only the mad old bat knows where…”
He chuckled loudly, scaring the Bagoons in the cages.
She had played her part well, all these years, and would soon be rewarded for her loyalty.
They would be ‘The Lord of the lands and his consort.’ with all the high born crushed under his heels.
The Council had exiled him over his dark aides as they called them. In reality, he knew that they were scared and envious of his newly acquired powers. The spineless cowards had been unwilling to break the ancient oath and grab at everlasting glory, proclaiming truth and light as the greatest gifts.
‘He would show them the meaning of greatness, true power.’
A scrap at the open roof grabbed his attention, the vulture glided down, encircling the clustered room.
Casting a quick, non verbal spell; transformed the scavenger into the hideous shape of his slave.
Trembling hands handed him the silk scroll wrapped up in protective Kusha grass.
‘Remove the grass blanket!’ he thundered, pulling away his hand as though it had been singed.
If things went well, the hated Charis’, Shaks’ and Warriers’, in particular, would be graced by an ancient visitor on the next moonless night. The Green Dew would bring with it, this time, the Elder Borns’ decimation.
***My muse is keen on a romantic twist, she refuses to cooperate otherwise so this stays as first chapter for now. ;(
Tentative Chapter 1 - Going Back
The
day faded into the dark cloudy sky. So much like her dreams and hopes that were
pushed into the farthest recesses of her mind. Often, she sat on the parapet in
that corridor and gazed at the crowd around her. Some faces looked back at her
with the familiarity of shared time, some recognising her as one they often
passed by on their way to and back from. There were few that barely acknowledged
her person except to taunt and tease. But even they were forced to retreat and
seek other avenues of amusement...for today, she was oblivious. Her thoughts were thousands of miles away
where her heart lay still, broken and shattered on that carpeted floor of a
place that had once been a second home. Maybe Fazia swept away those invisible
pieces in a single, mindless motion under the carpet. Pity broken hearts did
not bleed, even magical ones...else someone would have noticed the faint red
stains; red, not blue like some still liked to believe.
The envelope in her hand, a beautiful one at
that, artistic like the sender and yet it held the destructive powers of an
atomic bomb. Courage that she had been gathering for the last two hours, to
open and read the contents of the card eluded her. Words that could well turn out to be
the final nail on the coffin of her dreams. She had been prepared for this
moment from the evening she had fled that room. These three years had been
difficult and yet strangely, fulfilling for her.
The
real memories too painful to look back into. Zeenat’s betrayal had rankled as
she saw her in his embrace. But time had helped her see the truth…she was the
one at fault, clutching at straws and being in love with someone whose heart had
already been claimed. If only she had known, the countless times she had bored
Zeenie with her tale of unrequited longing, she had been confiding her deepest
secrets to the one he loved and who returned his affection. Humiliation and
guilt had prevented her from saying her goodbyes; she had taken the cowardly
way out of a letter. In a snap of a few minutes she had lost two of her beloved
friends and many of her family. Another memory flickered of a day when her
heart still beat, wildly at that.
“The
Shakhs often marry close cousins, don’t they?’ she had asked casually, once.
He
had just smiled as Zarine answered, “I am living proof.”
She had been secretly thrilled at the thought
that they were third generation cousins.
Little
did her foolish day dreams permit her to see beyond the illusions, every
glance, every smile which fell her way had been for the other one. The One, who
had been their companion from childhood.
Often
nowadays she laughed aloud at her mistakes, which in turn evoked more glances
from the students who passed by. One too many made; the worst had been
confessing her feelings to him. The laughter which dissolved into hot tears as
she glanced at the shiny paper in her hand.
“Aren't you going to open it? It is getting crushed under the weight of your hands.”
She
turned around, to see a smiling Ced seated next to her, his long legs dangling awkwardly.
One
of her best friends, he wasn’t the kind to laugh at her pain. The special bond
they shared enabled him to be attuned to her emotional and mental state of
mind. Puzzled at his behaviour, she remained silent. But the tears had stopped,
his very presence giving her strength.
Ced
waited, patience one of his many virtues. When it looked unlikely that she
would utter a word or open the envelope whose true contents he was aware of, he
pulled it away gently from her tight grasp.
She let go, as she always did with people she
trusted and cared for.
He undid the strings, admiring the artistry of
his cousins to reveal a golden coloured note attached to the envelope.
He spelled the letter to speak loud enough for
only the two of them to hear…
Exultations
to one and all, our esteemed family, friends and allies.
The
event had arrived that which every proud, honoured father looks to, the
marriage of our beloved granddaughter…
“Stop,
please, no more…” she cried as she jumped down from the wall preparing to flee.
“Running
away never solved anything, Ria” unspelling it.
“Would
you be so cruel to make me listen?” a pleading in her voice.
He
smiled kindly “Trust me on this.”
Ria
stood with her back to him, waiting for the familiar, gruff tone.
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The letter spoke... barely hearing the words till the last name. She turned back in shock, snatching the letter from his hand. No matter how many times she read or heard it, the name was a constant. The card fell to the floor from shaky hands...her thoughts forming and unforming at a dizzying pace. It could be true, her dark thoughts...
'He couldn't be..., could he?'
She heard Ced's calm voice in her head. 'There must be another explanation.'
'He will never break his promise unless...'
'I tried reaching T.C but it is too noisy here.'
She looked at him, words were unnecessary between them.
'I have arranged for us to leave in three days...but you still have your exams to clear.'
Swinging her legs, 'Later, these classes are not of much use in our world, are they?'
'Then why waste three years?'
'As if, you don't know the answer to that?'
'You could have enrolled with me. You had the grades.'
'Just the grades, not the aptitude...can't atleast you see? I needed to get away from them all. Those pitying faces, they knew, they always did.'
Ced shook his head sadly, pulling away from their connection, 'You are so wrong. They still wonder why you had to leave, if the letters to Ceci are anything to go by.'
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Three of her classmated passed her by. One waved as the other two stared at her cousin.
She waved back robotically, surprised at the extra grins directed at
her. With the exception of Sarah, the girl who waved, they had never spoke more
than a few words to her in all these years. They considered her odd, often
laughing at her Indian accent.
She made no move to introduce him, as she watched with equal contempt.
Turning to him, “So what where you saying? Those things in common?” raising an
eyebrow.
“For once, are as stubborn as you.”
She had to laugh at that.
Epilogue
Ali and Simi trudged up the slope... the others would have gathered on the top by now.
Ali looked at the plains in grim silence.
Simi walked quietly beside, the ideal travel and sparring partner to her twin, though she was hard pressed as to why he didn't fly the carpet.
Reading his thoughts, “ This journey is as much for her as Shammi Uncle, isn’t it?”
He looked at her for a moment and responded, “ I promised to protect her and failed.”
“You saved her life…the healer says that her soul is lost in the void, not left her body yet.”
Ali smiled,a first in many months.
There were many sad eyed, happy faces that stared back at them.
“How is Ria?” asked T.C as a small group approached them.
“ The same since you last visited.”
“Come children, change into your robes, the memorial chants begin shortly.”
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