As she nervously rambled on about the detergent sales dip in their branch;
he pondered guiltily over their break-up's effect on her.
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She stood on the ground /
Pride and grace personified /
Nature's porcelain dream //
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12 comments:
Your haiku is so beautiful, the vision of a true lady
I've seen a couple or romantic takes on this one, but this is the first romantic breakup.
Of course, I'm hoping that she's distracted by her new love interest - the other guy in the photo, perhaps?
Lovely haiku as well.
Nice ones :-)
I really enjoy the Haiku
very moving.
unique take on this pic!
That's why office romances are usually not a good idea!
Beautiful haiku!
Both are excellent.
If he is wondering about the break up then he must be the dumper...Nice take this week!
Well, he has a conscience. I'll give him points for that. :) Nice MF!
BAD MAN...
I hope he gets up and does soemthing to help her now ..
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Haikus are so challenging but you really rocked this one.
"nature's porcelain dream", I like that, showing fragility of the strong persona she tries to show on the outside. A wonderful haiku.
superb job.
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Glad you made it this far...would love to hear your take on the words scribbled. A comment every now and then keeps the blues away. :D
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