White Wizard,
He's going away,
White Wizard,
Can't you make him stay?
All this time you were around,
Silent and Eager, Quiet and Strong.
Took for granted all the moments
Now long gone just memories
Of our unfinished song.
There you were
When need made me cling..
Its a crime, a crying shame,
That fear made me let go
Of what was mine...
First there was Fate,
And then there were Rules,
Strangers both to
One's that choose.
One sealed my lips,
The other crushed my soul,
Together tormenting,
Never for a moment apart.
Desperate mind that never knew,
Hell it would be,
To live without you.
Wishful thinking of a foolish heart,
Things would change..
Tonight the stars will shine'
Tomorrow the sun will rise again....
8 comments:
Circumstances sometimes make inevitable events. Some make ships to part, while some bring them to the shores.
But there is always a new day.
Nice read.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Such a beautiful way to end a great dreamy poem!
Lovely poem even though sad, filled with longing and regret.
"First there was Fate,... I loved this stanza very much.
A bit of whimsy, a lot of longing. Enjoyed it.
Writer, idol! wow...very soul touching piece , ah seems i can relate! love this..
The flow of this is just stunning and the emotions the longing, the disappointment its so raw and emotional
Fate is something we cant fight .. but rules maybe we shud think about them and change the ones which dont mean anything anymore ..
Bikram's
Simply Beautiful !!!
:) :)
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