Lost in heavy trance
her son, glistening eyes saw
the bike rider start.
he drove on; unaware of shouts to stop,
she still stood, awaiting.
Added to Haiku Heights (first 3 lines), Grandma's Goulash (all 5 lines).
# 39 RandomMusings For The Day
If being a blood sucker is cool, aren't mosquitoes the coolest?....they don’t even sparkle in the sun. ;D
13 comments:
Ah, these sorcerers can be tricky.
Nice one.
I cant see the picture :(
I wud not mind the PrankPasha play some pranks here and there :)
Bikram's
Those sorcerers are interesting creatures! :)
I love the name PrankPasha
Perfect name for a sorcerer :-)
I think I'd prefer a cat to a donkey, although this one looks a bit dangerous. I really enjoyed your slant on the photo.
@Anthony North, @Lisa thanks for the visit and comment.
@Bikramjit glad you liked it.
@Anyes, @Dianne thanks for the visit and liking the name....I liked it too.
@GG thanks for visiting and glad you enjoyed my MF
Lovely microfiction, Rekha! Love the idea of a PrankPasha, and I do hope debts get paid back...:)
Lynette
Imagination Lane
that is definitely what I was searching for, You have saved me alot of time
Great take on the photo!
This made me smile. :)
Liked this..was that picture inspired from Alladin and Genie, of Grandma should answer this qn..right?
LOL, this could even make a bigger story, with the same theme.
Interesting.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
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Glad you made it this far...would love to hear your take on the words scribbled. A comment every now and then keeps the blues away. :D
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