Past -
“Think it’s possible?”
Present -
If omelettes were to be his tingle,
“Think it’s possible?”“Frankly Andy, the skull is too small to be human.”
“Request Brown to create a new branch. Lucy* will soon be passe.”
*Lucy as in Hominin of whom only one species - homosapiens (us) survives
*Lucy as in Hominin of whom only one species - homosapiens (us) survives
Present -
Hammering talks of Pattinson’s hair everywhere
Swear never has anyone else been discussed threadbare.
Can understand a hyper, emotional teen,
Swear never has anyone else been discussed threadbare.
Can understand a hyper, emotional teen,
But an older woman screaming, a disturbing scene.
If omelettes were to be his tingle,A vegan’s wife will soon be single.
Added to Magpie Tales 62, Thurdsay Poets rally 42
30 comments:
Good ones. Love "the skull is too small to be human." I don't know, I've known some pretty small minds. LOL
Thanks for playing Succinctly Yours.
Delightfully creative! Well done.
I was thumbing threw Starz magazine while awaiting on my hair appt. today and there was a whole article on Justin Beiber trying to grow a mustache. I tried not to roll my eyes. lol
This is very entertaining, Rek. I especially like the last two lines.
xoRobyn
Excellent! Just stopping by for a little catch up. Hope you are having a great week. Thanks for visiting :-)
Big themes this week! A surprising and intriguing take.
clever
what can i say to this lovely piece...
Bikram's
Heheh! :D The last two lines of the Magpie piece attracted me most! It was so much fun!
My Post Is Here
These are brilliant. As an armchair anthropologist the first one caught my eyes, but when I saw what you did with this week’s photo prompt, I bowed in homage.
I’m loving the Week 42 Rally! Here’s mine: http://kmcgeepoet.wordpress.com/2011/04/20/warning-lights/
unique and they tickle me. :)
lol! love that poem. and twimoms can be scary.
nutschell
www.thewritingnut.com
Laughing...I really like what you did with this one, especially how you incorporated this week's Mag.
Very fun reads and so clever.
Your elucidate on human fate... to misplace interest and concern.
Enjoyable and smart piece.
lovely piece.
oh! this is good, as always if i may add :P
loved it :)
too small to be human? ahaha he didn't meet the rest! brilliant :)
Thanks @Grandma for liking it.
@Thanks Donna for the visit and comment.
@M PAX Sometimes they go overboard, it kinda of pity today's celebrities...tough public life.
@Robyn hope I was up your alley..you are the mistress of humour. :)
@Porky yes big themes every week.. :D
@Thanks Isabel for commenting.
@BIkram ji glad to leave you without words. :D
@ Martha for visiting and commenting :)
@ Vinay glad you found it funny enough :)
@K. McGee I am so glad you enjoyed both...you write lovely stuff too. :)
@bttrflyscar very ticklish are we?...will try again next time. :)
@Nutschell glad you enjoyed it...won't want to meet one of them ...*shudders*
@Andy glad to be of service...do visit again.
@Teric thank you for the kind words.
@Kim yes, sometimes we focus our energies on irrelevant things.
@Steve glad to see you back...and that found it interesting
@Morning thank you.
@Paulomi well for you to love something...must be really good. ;P
@Bended spoon may be he wasn't paying attention. :D
Very entertaining poem. Thanks for sharing.
Great poem. Love the use of rhyme.
Nice :)) In the "Past" we used to have interesting, entertaining and engaging discussions, but now... Whatever happened to mind-your-own-business or be-yourself or read-a-damn-book?!
Love it! Haven't expected a prompt like this. Original! Again, love it!
Fun poems -- very nice.
If omelettes were to be his tingle,
A vegan’s wife will soon be single.
LOL! This poem is such fun!
Breaking up the form. Gotta love that. ^_^ Keep it up!
Yep, yep ... very creative. Like it? No, love it!
Interesting past present situation. The last two lines made me laugh too. :)
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