100 words using the Sensory Details Literary Device (the five senses) I ambled along on this weather beaten path to god knows where. The tourist brochure had looked enticing enough to pour non existent savings on a well deserved vacation, a last chance to mend the rift between us.
He bungled up as was he was wont to, not laziness but sheer indifference.
The cottage looked more like a haunt for lost ghosts.
An accidental touch of the wall sent chilling tingles down my spine.
The stench of despair was everywhere inside.
Whispering voices rang the death knell all night long.
I tasted the bitterness of defeat long before the end.
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Glad you made it this far...would love to hear your take on the words scribbled. A comment every now and then keeps the blues away. :D
Since, crazy Mr. Blogspot won't let me reply to the comments here (is upset with the water ladies ever since they refused to verify visitors)...will do the next best thing, drop in to your blog to say my Vanakkam/Namaste/Salaam/Hello.