Lost in heavy trance
her son, glistening eyes saw
the bike rider start.
he drove on; unaware of shouts to stop,
she still stood, awaiting.
Added to Haiku Heights (first 3 lines), Grandma's Goulash (all 5 lines).
# 39 RandomMusings For The Day
If being a blood sucker is cool, aren't mosquitoes the coolest?....they don’t even sparkle in the sun. ;D
11 comments:
Loved the blog look !
And such touching post !
Very emotional for a haiku. Well done.
A completely different take on the prompt photo. Yes, very well done.
— K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
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I love your take on this prompt, and your page is simply a beautiful place to visit...:)
This is a spellbinding microfiction. I felt myself totally caught up in it.
this is so captivating ,
This is poignantly beautiful. Nice combination with the haiku and then the rest for a great SY microfiction!
Very unique take on the prompt, wonderful. Your page is like a magical forest, its very nice
amazing,
love your take/style.
well written. and i could not but laugh on the randommusings for the day ;)
@Tim, @Jingle, @Paulomi, @mindlovemisery Love your feedbacks. :D
@Ladynimue thanks for lovely response to the Haiku
@Kay, @Lynette @Pat, @Grandma thanks for coming by and liking my MF.:)
@meethimirchi thanks for the comment.
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Glad you made it this far...would love to hear your take on the words scribbled. A comment every now and then keeps the blues away. :D
Since, crazy Mr. Blogspot won't let me reply to the comments here (is upset with the water ladies ever since they refused to verify visitors)...will do the next best thing, drop in to your blog to say my Vanakkam/Namaste/Salaam/Hello.