February 01, 2011

The Walk - Magpie Tales 51







Chipped red bricks pathway /
 Dull echo less footfalls left /
Seems familiar yet distant //







11 comments:

Bikramjit said...

Oh madam ji... lovely

the red brick pathways are quiet common here in uk :)

i know i know its completley off the topic but my GREY CELLS have gone toooooo GREY turning white now ...

Bikram's

anthonynorth said...

We all know that sound. Nice one.

Old Ollie said...

Great style - nice take on the pic.

Tess Kincaid said...

Familiar yet distant. Nice.

Kristen Haskell said...

Here is one more drop in your ocean. I love the last phrase as I am living the familiar but at times from a distance.

Reflections said...

Such depth in just a few short lines... nicely done.

Boonie S said...

Very atmospheric. Thanks for this.

Wishing you well, Boonie

Rashmi said...

very familiar yet distant...so true.

Summer Rain said...

awesome.

seems familiar but distant..
love it.

Helena said...

How I've often felt that distance....nice 'pie!

Rek said...

Thanks everyone for your wonderful inputs... appreciated... :)

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