tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6418708650443226085.post5183333755551561044..comments2024-01-08T17:18:58.736+05:30Comments on A Chronicle Of Dreams: A Coincidence?Rek Seshhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13484322426994645221noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6418708650443226085.post-1587048274811311382012-08-15T10:13:07.704+05:302012-08-15T10:13:07.704+05:30Dear Rek,
Thank you for visiting my post.You have ...Dear Rek,<br />Thank you for visiting my post.You have asked some very good questions about the characters in my story; no one is really at fault, but everyone's lives has been shaken. Will they recover?<br /><br />Your story is intriguing and makes me want to know more. What is in the envelope?<br /><br />It is to me a little unclear as to what happens at the end. Does she fall down and faint?<br /><br />Best wishes,<br />Anna<br /><a href="http://annas-adornments.blogspot.se/2012/08/rfw-challenge-no-42-i-need-change.html" rel="nofollow">RFW No.42 - 'I need a change'</a><br /> Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6418708650443226085.post-63226016100100412432012-08-13T11:18:27.099+05:302012-08-13T11:18:27.099+05:30I very much like the voice and descriptions of thi...I very much like the voice and descriptions of this story. I got lost at the end about the package and it's contents. You need to give us a little bit of a hint.Scheherazadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08906467791904395295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6418708650443226085.post-77652337688413338602012-08-13T08:29:33.053+05:302012-08-13T08:29:33.053+05:30What was in the envelope??What was in the envelope??Ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04735148155885016692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6418708650443226085.post-6566320879359548632012-08-12T04:55:30.910+05:302012-08-12T04:55:30.910+05:30Hello Rek. Amazing mystery package in 400 words. I...Hello Rek. Amazing mystery package in 400 words. I love the voice in your story, and how you build up the suspense to the chilling ending - 'Bastard!' What has husband dear been up to in Goa? Why didn't he want her with him? Hmm...more please...<br /><br />DeniseDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6418708650443226085.post-33526966427027847402012-08-12T04:46:24.889+05:302012-08-12T04:46:24.889+05:30I'd love to know what was in that package...I'd love to know what was in that package...Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6418708650443226085.post-74718306393311364582012-08-12T04:03:01.184+05:302012-08-12T04:03:01.184+05:30As I read I kept thinking the scoundrel wasn't...As I read I kept thinking the scoundrel wasn't coming back from his "business trip".<br /><br />I liked the flow of this, and the cultural references to places and her normal life. This captured my senses too. <br /><br />Have a good weekend Rek. If you don't see me here on Monday it means I forgot, so please drop by my blog to remind me. I'd like to read JC's post here. Thanks.<br /><br />......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6418708650443226085.post-66302694153086611642012-08-12T03:23:16.145+05:302012-08-12T03:23:16.145+05:30Dear friend,
What was in the envelope?? You left u...Dear friend,<br />What was in the envelope?? You left us with a mystery here but with a sweet flavor of romance. Good write and thanks for sharing.The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6418708650443226085.post-43634173676802879982012-08-11T23:06:17.626+05:302012-08-11T23:06:17.626+05:30Hmmm...I wonder what was in the package also. I li...Hmmm...I wonder what was in the package also. I like the romance and suspense of this piece but I want to know more :)Heather Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11847855601653718033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6418708650443226085.post-40602987897099273482012-08-11T17:40:39.711+05:302012-08-11T17:40:39.711+05:30A great ending, Rekha. Nicely done all the way thr...A great ending, Rekha. Nicely done all the way through too.Adura Ojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10787703060107491771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6418708650443226085.post-58186101839372826982012-08-11T13:53:51.893+05:302012-08-11T13:53:51.893+05:30Great story - I can feel all the emotions - especi...Great story - I can feel all the emotions - especially the last sentence. Well done.Sallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6418708650443226085.post-8876785625087421692012-08-11T13:07:50.461+05:302012-08-11T13:07:50.461+05:30I liked the way your use the style of a historical...I liked the way your use the style of a historical novel for this piece. I hope your MC finds her strength and wins out over the 'bastard'!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6418708650443226085.post-7022329640747398272012-08-11T02:35:15.671+05:302012-08-11T02:35:15.671+05:30Wow, that's a really intriguing story, Rek. I&...Wow, that's a really intriguing story, Rek. I'm really curious as to what was in the envelope.M Paxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14096697282530998519noreply@blogger.com